5.23.2005

re butt al

re: the comment posted in response to "dear anonymous skinny dipper"

last weekend, in that nor cal town,
i ran up hayes street hill and down
with the knowledge that i could get caught
behind a wrinkled arse wraught
with dimples.

but, once back in l.a.
and at work the next day,
i did not expect
something so erect
to jump out of the pool
after hours.

forgive me, runner 5552,
but kicking him out was the least i could do.

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

you pose an interesting response miss.
i'd like to say 'touche',
but there are a couple o' things you forgot to mention here
while you closed the pool that fateful day.

you used mots like 'knowledge' & 'expect'
while you ran your heart out in that race up north

but there's another point of view, i think,
that i should hence put forth

the dudes up there, all dressed down to their b-day suits
were flaunting way too much (me thinks), in an environment well too lit!


while mr. skinny dipper dude, in vain it seems, tried to cover up quickly and fast.
only to get caught with his pants down...
and now he's just embarrASSed!

this witty banter is just too much fun.
i'm sure we could go on,
but the next time you start closing down,
i hope you see the sun.
and not another moon.